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Artist name: didilydoowiki; Song title: "Performing Lines" & "Licorice Heart"

We speak irrationally when spoken to by any living creature without a tongue.
Visit Artist' site for this and other songs: Garageband.com/didilydoowiki;

didilydoowiki have requested complete comments on the songs "Performing Lines" and "Licorice Heart".
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didilydoowiki ->
"We speak irrationally when spoken to by any living creature without a tongue. We hear with little composture while stuck in crawls
spaces. We rock with no frogs amongs us but with little else that makes small differences. "

"Performing Lines" and "Licorice Heart" are two other exceptional songs by the Artist didilydoowiki! I'm into a total obscurity about the age, experience, or achievements of this Artist/Band; but the high quality of the work shows


comprehensive thoughts and talent in the expression of ideas and feelings thru the music. These two song represent a unique signature of songwriting and performance.

The songs structures are well formed. The melodies and harmonies are properly balanced for a sensitively attracting experience. They are Radiofriendly and although they have a commercial appeal, even the sophisticated alternative listener will be satisfied.

Both songs are worth listening, and if there is an album out there I'm quite sure its values are beyond the money it would cost.

The title "Licorice Heart" makes you think, makes you wonder what a listener would find in a song. And what is in it will fully satisfy the genre lovers. On the other side "Performing Lines" is a good title from a musician's point of view. But it doesn't say much to a general listener. Plus, the line "Performing Lines" is not available anywhere thru the lyrics (except for the title). Usually a title is meant to help the llistener remember a song, and possibly something of interest from that song. So it is a good idea to use some of the strongest parts of the song lyrics for a title. The final words of the Chorus, or a line from the hook work very well!

With this only note as criticism, I could add that these songs need to reach the large audiences. Publishers and producers are always in need for such high quality material. Didilydoowiki know/s the secrets of creating potential hits evidently - songs writen with a heart and good sense! Excellent job!

Good Luck,
Anton Tontchev
for MSSVision.com - July/31/2004

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