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One thing you don't need, is the guitar part after the first Chorus.
It is OK up to the vocal - start the Verse right after that.
Also, in order to establish a stronger presence of the Chorus,
you could add some more instruments - another guitar, a tambourine
should work just fine here. Give it a try. Guitar in chords while
singing and some melodic themes between the phrases. That will make
the Chorus more complete and impressive.
And again, instead of finishing with the "whoo" vocals,
you should repeat the Chorus at the end - two or three times is
fine.
Where the Pan Flute came from at the end?
It is nice - the way you use it. But adding a new instrument at
the end of the song is not nice. There's no reason for doing so!
You could use it, instead, since the beginning, or during the Verse
or Chorus (which will add a particular color to that part), and
finish with the Chorus - without the fade out - for a greater dynamic
and emotional effect.
And don't be afraid of repeating it. It's a good one and the listener
has to remember it.
Good Luck,
Anton Tontchev
for MSSVision.com - 4/24/2003
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