It goes smoothly since the first notes and is a very pleasant track.

An example for good taste and mature Artistic approach is the overall sound - instruments, musicianship and song structure play a major role here and are the strongest aspects of the song, and...

Well, I'm not going to extol how good it is - this is not the purpose of this site.

But I'd like to draw the attention to another kind of structure - the Verse and the Chorus.
When you consider them one by one - they play fine, they are right, there's no flaw.

The "problem" (or "non perfection") arises when you listen to the entire song. They are just too similar... or their structure is too similar (if not the same).

And this leads to monotony (or kind of)... which, on the other hand, is minimized (lucky you;) by its (chorus or verse) strengths.

Actually, while listening for the first time, it seemed like the Chorus is missing dynamics. But it isn't. It's just (again) too similar to the Verse.

I think you see what I mean, and you can easily "repair" for future works.

Anyway, excellent work for all other aspects - Title, Lyrics, Performance, Genre definition (very important!), Arrangement. And the overall sound can be considered "major" one - it is clean and has those so desired unique notes!
Good recordings too, by the way.

Another thing you could consider (but not much important here) is the song end - I don't think commercial radios like fade outs...

Keep up the good work!

Good Luck,
Anton Tontchev
for MSSVision.com - 04/24/2003