|
The performance fit the genre and the style is stable.
The one sentence review is - "It's a good song"!
What can be done to make this good song a memorable one?
There is need for a better structure:
Verse - Chorus, Verse Chorus... and it keeps that way for four minutes
- not a good way to act!
There are two solutions here:
1. Cut the songs length to 3 min.
2. (The better one) Put a solo in the middle and a bridge which
leads to the Chorus - and you've got the winning song!
That's the only "problem" I see here. All the rest works fine!
The arrangements, choice of instruments, performance etc. - good
work. The Chorus is memorable, which makes it commercial/radiofriendly.
The mass appeal is evident and the overall sound is positive and
involving.
It seems like the kind of songs you'll hear on the radio.
This is positive! Folk/Country lovers will be pleased with the listening.
***Better recordings will help further this tune.
****Have listened to all the songs anyway - my favorite is
"1952"!
Henrix
for MSSVision.com -
11/04/2001
|
