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So.., the sample is OK! Vocals, harmonies and performance are right
into soul and the listener will be able to satisfy his daily needs
(for this genre). I would probably fall in love with that voice
sensuality, if I was a girl... And I hope that there is a Chorus
strong enough to confirm those feelings!
There is one thing that could be better underlined - Time! Where
it belongs?
Some elements remind you the 80's, but it could be 90's as well.
The 80's thing comes out of the synth sound mostly, and it can be
fixed easily.
Anyway reminding any time period is OK, but it has to be done with
a modern approach.
In this tune you could make the instrument parts a little more
"aggressive" (sound and EQ). That way these voices, harmonies and
soul atmosphere will stand out even more and the today's sound will
be present.
That said, "In My Bedroom" is definitely a song that soul lovers
will love!
Henrix
for MSSVision - 11/03/2001
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