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Click play and it sounds as you have turned on a major format R&B
radio station! Great work of songwriting and performance! Enjoyable
track since the first notes. The memorable Chorus in combination
with danceable rhythm make the song unique and well positioned for
a Billboard hit.
With such good music and performance, one thing that comes out
and begs for "repairs" is the MIDI sound. The track needs
definitely much better instruments. Especially the strings and the
electronic piano are hurting badly the overall sound. Using better
sounds would really help the song to acquire the "major"
sound it deserves. And a more powerful drum set is of utmost importance
here too.
The Chorus is strong and makes the song memorable, but could be
even more intense. The same approach as in "Silent Treatment"
could prove to be helpful. Add something to the rhythm. A straight
beat in quarters or eight notes coming from keyboard, strings, or
percussions would be suitable. Also, hand claps on the last two
eight notes of each measure would make the Chorus even more involving
and memorable!
Very good job! It is a pleasure to listen to this song. You feel
familiar with it since the beginning. With the first listening you
realize that no comments are needed but radio plugs!
Hey, DJs! Where are you? Play this song and make your audience
happy!
Anton Tontchev
for MSSVision.com - 08/02/2005
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